Reviews for Lips Burn Caustic
Scene-Damagexx chapter 4 . 10/20/2007
I love Alex Evans, Matthew Lush and Jeffree Star too, hahaha. Especially Alex Evans. I liked him looking like a little kid, I mean, geez, I just wanted to shrink him and shove him in my pocket. I mean, I still do, but it's just not the same. xD

HAHA Everett is a myspace whore gonna turn Scene King. Yummy. XD That's pretty funny, I have to say. Then again, I guess the appeal gets all scene kids/emo kids eventually.

The new Scary Kids CD is pretty good, I've got to agree. My favorite new album of this year though is Bone Palace Ballet by Chiodos. It's amazing.

And FFTL! My best friend and I LOVED them for the longest time. Matt Good is basically's Derek Bloom. I still like them a lot, but until I hear some of their new music without Sonny, they aren't in my top five or ten. I need to do that. Um. Jono Evans is really hot. Yeah, Jono!

*cough* OK, I'm done rambling for today, I believe. Haha.

Looking forward to chapter 5!
i found alaska chapter 3 . 10/18/2007
i'm beginning to love rosco.

your story makes me giggle.

it's great.
Scene-Damagexx chapter 3 . 10/18/2007
Crazy thing: I'm just finishing up Spirit Week right now xD Today was Random was really weird, but totally awesome. I've been going all out, since I'm a Junior and all that fun stuff. :]

Leeches scare the living hell out of me. One time, I was up in Oregon and well, there was this bionic leech. IT WOULDN'T DIE!

And the Freshmen at my school remind me of the really annoying girls in this story. Thankfully, none of spazzed out about me sharing a can of Monster with my friend Kyle.

Enough rambling. Rosco shouldn't go to homecoming because homecoming dances are lame. My school is cool and has a homecoming Concert, since uh, that's what non-dancing schools do after a fun game of football. . I don't like transition chapters much, but I think you pulled this one off nice.

Now I have to go bake and burn a CD. Looking forward to the next chapter! D And sorry for all the rambling...
burntwater chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
Ok, so I only read the first chapter so far. I think it was great. And also, I read Stephen Chbosky's The Perks of Being a Wallflower - my favorite book! It was an awesome chapter. Awesome awesome job writing it.
sweets555 chapter 3 . 10/18/2007
its not horrible! not at all.

but feel free to update tonite away!

grr. i know girls like not fond of them. but im sure ull make it better!
Scene-Damagexx chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
haha this story made me giggle. I love it. :]

So yeah, do me a big, big favor and update much as you can. I want to know what happens.

Everett sounds hot.

And Chiodos is pretty much freaking amazing. So is Mayday Parade. Yeah.

i found alaska chapter 2 . 10/17/2007
your story is pretty freaking rad. i like it.

oh, yeah, and alesana is uh-mazing :]
Young Love chapter 2 . 10/17/2007
the main person in here, is it a boy or a girl?

other than that, this story is interestiny. keep writing!
sweets555 chapter 2 . 10/16/2007

well darling, id love to marry you, but i dont think my BF would be okay with that. sorry.

i agree, the catcher is a terrible book.

good chapter!
sweets555 chapter 1 . 10/15/2007

rosco makes me giggle.

great job!
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Great beginning. I know people who are homophobic. I am not, but I thought you did a wonderful job expressing your main character's emotions. I'm sure he'll get over his homophobia eventually. ;)

Looking forward to more.

Cute penname with the Russian and the meaning of the Russian word.

Good luck with writing, this story, and life.

Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~
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