Reviews for Crawling Flies
relapse into change chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
this is great

i love it

-just wow
Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
I love this poem. The end of itactually made me shiver because I can totally relate. That line "sleeping late and waking late and living late" was genius. The whole flow of it was wonderful. This is definitely going on my favorites.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Our lives can feel so trivial at times. I liked this. The contrasts of then and now, but how they are somehow similar. Great job.