|Reviews for Crawling Flies|
| relapse into change chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
this is great
i love it
| Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
I love this poem. The end of itactually made me shiver because I can totally relate. That line "sleeping late and waking late and living late" was genius. The whole flow of it was wonderful. This is definitely going on my favorites.
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Our lives can feel so trivial at times. I liked this. The contrasts of then and now, but how they are somehow similar. Great job.