Reviews for Midnight
purplepants chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
i feel like this is kind of cliche in the sense that "pitter patter" is as over used as " quiet enough to hear a pin drop" sorta thing. i also feel like the wording at the end seemed a bit forced and didn't really flow properly. but i really liked the middle section, it gave me a good sense of midnight. good job :]