Reviews for The Rose of Whitekeep
augie.toaste chapter 10 . 12/27/2013
... Solemn, I have read this before, but I don't think I really appreciated it the first time. Isn't that funny? It's like re-watching a Disney movie as an adult. Now I see it's a masterpiece, it really is, and I don't think I can ever look at you the same way again. You do author-insert-uber-teen-girl well. Too well. Suspiciously well.

I laughed and cringed so hard that I think I've pulled a muscle. I'm now taking a good hard look at my writing and shitting my pants because I know I've tread dangerously close to producing the content/characters that would belong in such a 'mockumentary'.

Your credit list is nostalgic.
Lady Katreina chapter 10 . 3/10/2010
Spectacular. It was rather obvious, but it wasn't painful. And that is so important. Thank you so much for writing this story, it's fun and funny. And perfectly horridly obvious. Hazzah!
Lady Katreina chapter 6 . 3/10/2010
Absolutely you right good romantical fiction, I even have my Lindt Lindor Truffles just next to me for future needings such as when Andar will be unhappy because he will feel as if Tiff has abandoned him but as the reader I will know and you will know that Tiff will not abandon her White Elf for another including those of her own world because he is becoming her own the more they are together.

Thank you!
Lady Katreina chapter 5 . 3/10/2010
Oh my g_! You're beta is totally right, and you are too, all the time.

Like, oh, wow.

You are amazing, it is so funny reading this totally cliche work written in a... near-cliche manner with realistic people stunned by the bulldozing effect of someone well-versed in the cliche'arts. Thank you!
fictionalboyfriend chapter 10 . 4/7/2009
oh em gee wrighte moar plz!

...This is amazing. I didn't know anyone was that good, to get that far inside a teenage fangirl's head and get out again alive.
ilikebooks chapter 2 . 12/29/2008
i . . . i dont know what to say. im shaking my head right now because i thought this was so utterly . . .i dont know.

wow, an im not even sure i can review properly because oyu said that technically, this is tiff writng (since its from her perspective)and not you so . . . wow.

lol, if there's anything to say though, its that i love it. so many run on sentences! its the author's note that left me gaping though. its just so hard to picture a dude writing this, lol. anyway il stop being a moron now and im going to continue reading:) [but i really just need to say that to pull this off, dude, you HAVE to be a great author].

keep writing tiff_
Peskypiskie chapter 10 . 9/13/2008
This is absolutely hilarious. It was written so well and so terribly at the same time - the contrast is perfect! I enjoyed reading this so much - it made me laugh until my stomach hurt. Congrats.
Pixiepie chapter 10 . 7/24/2008
Although it has been many years since I was a teen-aged girl, I must admit I enjoyed this hilariously off-beat story. I have never read so many run-on sentences. But I totally believe Tiff talks just like that. Thanks for the smiles.
T.J.WIBBS08 chapter 2 . 6/7/2008
Great captivating story! could you please review mine! It is: The Secrets of the Lost Worlds Prologue! Please PLEASE REVIEW! I would really appreciate it!
Death Walks Alone chapter 5 . 5/12/2008
I think my favorite part so far has been the seamstressosity. Words like that make me giggle. Though the song of Bri'tanni is close runner-up. How on earth did you think of all this?

The plot's appropriately transparent, though, isn't it? I wonder, though, is Eldari going to be turned by Tiff's "charm and kindness"?

Very funny, very clever. I'm off to read the next chapter!
Death Walks Alone chapter 3 . 5/12/2008
I can't see elves playing "I Spy"...huh. Let's see...still slightly scared that you do this so well. And I'm not sure what to say, except that I think it's well done. (I may start reviewing every other chapter, so you don't get bored.)

Surely she isn't naïve enough to think all elves are good? I'm curious about how you're going to play this out.

I just realized something! I ought to leave a fanfic review. Ooh...that sounds like so much fun, I just might.
Death Walks Alone chapter 2 . 5/12/2008
My first thought reading this is: Should I be scared that you can write a girl's fanfic so well?

It keeps making me laugh, because of its cliche awfulness. You leave some of the contractions uncontracted, so it sounds a bit stiff. I don't know if that's what you're going for or not, but it's the only thing not great that I can find.

Onward!
Inarra Lake chapter 10 . 2/4/2008
I think you may have failed at making this story terrible. If you want, I can point out the incredibly creative and imaginative phrases and youcan snip them out and THEN it will be an utterly terribly written fanfiction.

Good luck with the rest of your works.
Inarra Lake chapter 9 . 2/4/2008
The dress was a masterpiece of daunting severity. It made mountains look silly and underdressed. Sheer granite cliffs and bottomless canyons would certainly have said, had they seen it, “Well, I didn’t know we were supposed to look nice for this.” Ball-gowns and eveningwear felt a sudden and inexplicable urge to hide in corners when it passed. Tuxedoes kept their impure thoughts to themselves.

Look, can you stop slipping these incredibly imaginative descriptions in here, it's making this story far too enjoyable.
Inarra Lake chapter 7 . 2/4/2008
"A few strains of music, a shy smile or two, and suddenly people are moving in ways they would never admit to during the dull rush of the day. The air feels softer, sweeter, and the stars lean in like expectant lovers; blushes blazing."

It's a fantastic fangiction parody, but little bits of yourself are pushed in, hiding behind the hilarity, popping out every so often to say hello.

That bit there sounds too nice for Oh-em-gee Tiff to be thinking it, lol, But it works. It's a breath of fresh air.
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