Reviews for Tempest
Chalk chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
wow..i LOVED it!

seriously, it was amazing..especially this line:

The storm is here, there’s nothing I can do

Outside, lightning strikes and rain pours

The storm is here, they do not understand

That inside it rages even more.

good, good!
CobblestoneTraveler chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
I really like this poem. A person can relate to this in so many ways. :)