Cute to see how palace life together ends up

Tee hee! Love it. Obviously.

Wow just wow, this story is fucking amazing. I rarely comment on things, but I absolutely love your characterizations of Helen, Ivan, and Andrei. *ALL THE CLAPS FOR YOU AND THIS STORY*

wow - I'm absolutely loving all ur stories so far...

I truely love your stories.

I never knew Ivan and the Wolf tale before...and I'm not sure if I'd like the original version better than this.

If people asked me, "Do you know 'Ivan and the Wolf'?" I would say, "Yeah...the slash version though. Obviously."

I know I've said this before but your work is absolutely wonderful! Each detail,thought,and emotion is vividly expressed.

I really appreciate this story.

It was original in dealing with the quest,the curse and the big brothers. truly refreshing. Thanks for sharing it.

AMAZING!

Aw!

I find it interesting that you choose to create slash stories based on Russian legends, seeing as a good majority of the country's population would be happy to see all homosexuals jailed.

But other than that, this is a really cute story :)

forgot to mention, it would be helpful to sometimes say who is talking, as i got confused about who was saying what, then i had to go back and realize, oh ok, he said that not him.

Ex:

“Taking the weight of the world upon yourself again, Ivan.”

“Just figuring some things out.”

“Heavens help us if you’re trying to think. You know that never leads to anything good.”

Ivan snorted with laughter as he attempted to sit up again, murmuring thanks when strong hands supported

*This was easy enough to read because the first line had "Ivan" in it, but sometimes the voices didn't fit until i read Ivan argued or "obviously," as the sentences could have fit both characters. By the way, the "obviously" is a nice touch.

I really liked this story, but there were some troubling aspects that i couldn't quite figure out and didn't want to, such as when Andrei telling Ivan to cut his head off. I couldn't figure out how he was able to tell him that if that was the only way he could be released from the curse...reason being is the not telling is part of the curse and he was able to tell.

Did you know, I actually dreamt Andrei last night...his silver eyes at least. I love that image i get when he, as the wolf and human, watches Ivan, and the making out of guy and guy is always a hot thing to picture... i wondered if it would have had the same impact with a man and woman?

Wow she has a harem? No that's just not fair! Or maybe that's the only way it would've worked...? I mean,one man couldn't handle her,but two...hm...Oh well! Andrei is just the same teasing,trying-to-be-as-annoying-as-hell-but-still-caring wolf that is very intent of devouring our cute little, but truly feisty, Vanya. Daily, if possible. Or was it hourly? Hm...;) I really loved this epilogue,it made a perfect ending to a great story! Way to go!

What an awesome story! Obviously. XD I am familiar with this folk tale and I must say that I never thought of slash-ing it. I'm glad you did,tho. It was such a great read with quite a bit of the original story preserved that if I ever dared reading it again in its original form,this story would keep popping inside my head ;) I loved Helen and her bossiness :) I could just picture her bossing the two of them around with that little sadistic grin on her face. Andrei... forms,obviously. I think that is quite self-explanatory. Ivan...just makes me want to cuddle him and ruffle his hair and then tease him mercilessly about his precious wolf ;) hee hee All in all,thank you for this great read!