Reviews for Out Of The Shadow
RockstarBallerina chapter 20 . 11/2/2007
I think that your roommate is right, about the chicken soup well I love chicken noddle (only from cambell's, that progresso stuff sux) it makes anything better. Well that sucks for Ally two of her boyfriends broke up with her. WellmI cant wait for the next chapter.
shedyourmask chapter 20 . 11/2/2007
Aww I really liked this chapter! Good job! Oh and Im in love with the Colts as well. My family is actually really great friends with James Mungro, if you rememeber who he is : ( he hurt his knee sniff sniff... Anyways... CONTINUE PLEASE lol and I cant wait for your next project
Strangely Natural chapter 20 . 11/2/2007
Aww Cole took care of her like a butch mother hen _

*some of that stuff you’re supposed to rub on your chest.” He tossed the jar to Cole. “You can do that part, bro.”* hehe cheeky bugger.

*He shrugged. “She’ll eat it. Tomorrow I’ll run over to the deli and get her real potato soup.”* he really is too much.

*“RJ,” Cole smirked. “He thinks anything with chicken in it will cure you.” * hehe.

*“Do you guys have my entire life planned out?” she asked moodily. They glanced at each other and shrugged. “Pretty much,” Jamie smirked.* I think it's wonderful, they care so much.

*“Bye,” she said softly and fled from his car before she gave in to her urges.* naughty Ally ;) yay we just had a huge moment _

*She didn’t know what she felt now.* so I notice. I want Cole and Ally to rediscover each other, it could be beautiful.

*I also know you still have lingering feelings for Cole* busted!

*She reached for him and he leaned closer, allowing her to kiss him softly. “You’re a good man, Robby,” she said. He grinned boyishly. “Yeah, so I hear.”* Hehe, well said! Well that was truly a lovely break up, very nice indeed.

What is her idea? hm...
bridgette261 chapter 20 . 11/2/2007
Aw Robby's a nice guy. Can I have him? :D

jamsie chapter 20 . 11/2/2007
sigh . . . this makes me all fuzzy inside! I wish that this story was already a published book becasue I can't stand the suspense of waiting for updates!

You are awsome! Go Team Awsome!
Caught In A Simple Game chapter 20 . 11/2/2007
Oh. My. Goodness.

I love it. I love that Ally and her guys are hanging out again, and I love love LOVE that Cole kissed her before she got out of the car. That made MY stomach flip! LOL. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter . . .

(In the meantime, here's a fun story for you. I was working on the next chapter for OAD at my campus job yesterday, then emailed it to myself, and Yahoo seems to have Bermuda-Triangulated the half of the chapter I had done.)
SiobhanO chapter 20 . 11/2/2007
please update! this was such a god chapter!
Nollie Marie chapter 20 . 11/2/2007
Loved it so what else is knew.



ps- I'll be on after 10:30 this morning if u r on.
Kaitlyn.Marie chapter 19 . 11/2/2007
and we all thank you for making him so no to Lila! really, it's for the best... I hope...


Strangely Natural chapter 19 . 11/2/2007
*She’d turned quiet last night after her run in with Cole and although Robby didn’t ask her outright, the question burned in his blue eyes. He respected her silence, however, and gave her the space he thought she needed.* he really is sweet.

*She opened the closet and found the shawl she knew her mother wanted and hurried down the hall before temptation could grab her and force her to peek in at his sleeping form.* hehe.

*RJ’s face told her the same but, like a huge piece of luscious chocolate cake, she couldn’t resist.* deliciously tempting isn't he?

*“What’d you find?” Lila asked as she leaned against the wall and smirked. She was dressed only in a wrinkled navy blue button up shirt. A man’s.* friggin' woman, spearing poison barbs in Ally's/Cole's heart.

*“Talk to me.” “No,” she bit out.* that's your biggest problem!

*“Look, Ally, I’ve been patient throughout this whole Cole ordeal, but if we’re going to continue to see each other, then you have to tell me what’s going on...He kissed her hand and made the exit for the airport, eager to get her away from Cole and her heartbreak.* yikes, an ultimatum oh no! It's veiled but it's there.

*Cole sat on the coffee table and took a deep hit off his cigarette. “You’re probably right, man.” He blew a perfect smoke ring. “I just don’t know if I can stay away from her.”* hehe YAY!

*It tore at her heart to know that although they’d never not include her, all of them knew it was best if she just stayed away.* is this the end of an era?

*She adored him, really, but the love she expected to grow between them just wasn’t there. She knew he realized it, too, though neither was ready to admit defeat yet.* best friends only as it should be.

*“I know that but he still considers you his friend and he said you’d be disappointed in him,” her face softened as she looked away. “He cried, you know. Yeah, he was drunk, but he broke down and told me how you two used to be best friends but now he doesn’t even know what you are anymore.”* aww isn't he precious!

*She yawned as her eyes closed. “I never slept with Robby, you know,” she mumbled. “You’ve always been the only one.”* I'll say! Whe!

*And I hope you all are happy Cole didn’t sleep with Lila. I was gonna have him sleep with her but I listened to you guys and I agreed with your reasoning so he didn’t.* thanks goodness that would have been devastating.
youpin chapter 19 . 11/1/2007
I am so glad that Cole did not sleep with Lila and Robby is really a good guy but Allie and Cole are meant to be together.
falsenotions chapter 19 . 11/1/2007

go cole and ally!
bridgette261 chapter 19 . 11/1/2007
:] I'm very happy with the way these chapters are going :)

Can't wait for the next update!

RockstarBallerina chapter 19 . 11/1/2007
aw...I love them! So freakin cute.
SiobhanO chapter 19 . 11/1/2007
i like that he didn't ) and also that lila told ally... it was good... im excited to hear the rest of the conversation!
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