u r an amazing writer i luv all ur phone calls stories and sequesl...their marvelous...

is there a reason why her emotions are all over the place?

You said in your authors note that cole and robby getting together would teach her a lesson. and other then the kiss, which she did feel bad about, she didnt do anything wrong and l think its unfair of you to imply that she is the badguy in the relationship.

Since l think l'm a first time reviewer l'll start with this, l love your stories! now... rant time, and this in no way is a reflection on you, or your writing. l HATE "breaks"! wth is a break? especially in coles case. lf he still loves her, taking a "break" isn't going to make him worry less. "breaks" are just an excuse for people to sleep around and not feel guilty when they realize how amazing their significant other is! l am so mad at cole! and l want cole to be with ally. unless he sleeps with lilah, then robby all the way.

Okay, okay. I just have to gush over this line, “I miss you when you’re in class,” OMG. I loved it! :D :D

ah! Ohmygawd! :P aah. *squee* :D lol.

They're getting married! *giggles* How amazing. yay!

:P I love how she went & woke Jamie up to talk to him about this whole "what if it's too late" deal. lol. & he was just like, "no it's not" and flopped back onto the bed. hahhaah. That was funny. Loved that part.

*squee* they're back together!

Communicate next time, people! :P Geez!

Wow. Those guys are constantly eating pizza. & it makes me want some every time! :P M. Pizza. Barbecue. Mm. My favorite. :D

LOL. RJ. 'Especially because of…you know…” he said, motioning at Cole.' RJ cracks me up.

& aw. This was so cute! 'she caught RJ sneaking a kiss on a shy dolphin’s head.' aww. & aww just one more time. :P

*gasp* No. I TOTALLY didn't see that coming. Seriously.

Gosh, there were a few lines in here that made me laugh but I can't remember which ones they were... let me look back...

Oh. I think one was where Cole knew what Ally's fav. soup was and RJ was hiding his smirk. :P

Oh. oh. & the other one is where they have her life planned out. lol. Funny, Jamie.

hah. That sounds like an awesome bet between you and MIA5081.

...I wonder who won...

hahah. This line, 'She slid to the ground, resting against the sign post' reminded me of the preview for Nick & Nora's Infinite Playlist. The part where the chick is sitting on the ground, talking on the phone and says, "I found Jesus! ...He's much taller in person..." lol.

Ugh. I'm so effin' confused! I STILL can't decide. C&A or R&A? Instead I've decided to make a new category. It'll be the "I'm just going to hang on for the ride and like who ever the writer decides to make Ally end up with." No, it's not the same as undecided b/c the undecided category is 'I can't decide between Cole or Robby.' My new category is more like 'I like both guys and I'll be happy with either one ending up with Ally' if that makes any sense. :P

ah. That's so weird. Halloween is coming up. A year after you posted this chapter. I'm not going trick-or-treating though. I haven't done that in about 7 years. I'll be stealing some candy from my niece though. LOL. Actually, technically my youngest niece is GIVING me all her candy. Her mom already told me! She's only eight months old... so it probably won't be a lot. :P

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I don't know. ...the phone conversation sort of felt like Ally WAS kind of using Robby to get over Cole. Ugh. I can't explain it but... You know the line... "You’re not?" she whispered. It felt like (to me at least :P) that she was really saying, "Oh. crap. You're not dating that chick... so you didn't move on... So why am I trying to move on?" hah. I think I'm reading way too much into things. :P I do that a lot.

ugh, Lila. Why is she still here? Wait... why do I still care? Cole and Ally are no more. So Cole can do whatever. :P But still. I don't like her very much. Who does?

When Lila said, "There’s plenty of cold beer inside." I thought she was trying to lure Cole away from witnesses to trap him in some room and rape him. LOL. Well, she didn't exactly do that... but she did TRY to seduce him. :P

& aaw. It was really sweet/cute how Robby and Ally brought in the new year... all dressed up in some random little bar. :D

ha. LOL. I knew that phone conversation was going to be misinterpreted.

I'm kind of exited! Actually, I'm REALLY excited! I want to know what you have planned -well, written. aah! I need to read more!

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... I still can't decide... if I like this whole Robby/Ally thing more than Cole & Ally. Maybe they should consider an open relationship. LOL. NO! No! Just kidding! wow. That would be weird. Just say no! :P

"All that will do is hurt all three of you." *sigh* I thought about that when I decided my category. *sigh* I really like Robby...I just want him to be happy too! *pouts*

ha. I still don't like Stephanie. lol. She wanted Jamie to say the baby was his when it wasn't? Is SHE on drugs?