Reviews for she gives you the wrong type of wings
relapse into change chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
this is amazing

i really loved it :)
this young lady chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
Wow, this is gorgeous. You've captured loads of feeling, which is difficult (well for me anyway lol), and your format is lovely.

m i love it.

keep writing.

lizzie x
Bonjour Skitty chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
Omg. I -adore- the way you described this girl. It's putting all of my obscenities made beautiful. Regretfully beautiful. Wonderful.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
wow. i kinda think that was amazing. although it wasnt the most pleasant thing ever...it was creative and well written. good work.
Nianko chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
It's a great poem, as always (: I love the way you pass on the feelins and the sensations on to the person reading. congradulations.
EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
This was a really interesting read. I love the ending, and the formatting you used did well to emphasise your ideas. Nice job :)