Reviews for a realization approaching november
kelsi bones chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
I like this style though. It works well with what you're trying to say (i think :P). Good work ]

perdita's kiss chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
I like the speed, rush, and jolt of this. It exemplifies electricity in that the progression is constant and immediate. Very fluid and thought conscious pace. Well written work. MD:77.
evm chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
It's lovely! Sounds like something I would write...ah those linebreaks, they can be quite dreadful when they feel like it.