|Reviews for Lightning in a Bottle|
| arisaswordheart chapter 10 . 11/6/2007
And all seems well. :)
| arisaswordheart chapter 9 . 11/3/2007
Oh this is sweet. I'm glad they're okay now - or at least they seem to be okay... ish?
| LilsurferSango17 chapter 9 . 11/2/2007
hmm... I can guess what happened between them before although I'm not one hundred percent positive. Interesting as always. I don't know about the other people, but I enjoy the soccer details. It makes the story seem more real and allows the person to understand her even better.
| arisaswordheart chapter 8 . 10/28/2007
| arisaswordheart chapter 7 . 10/27/2007
:) Nice story as always. This is interesting! Apart from the sport stuff which I might not always get - I'm not a sporty person.
| arisaswordheart chapter 4 . 10/26/2007
Sorry if I dont say anything, but I wasnt just going to read and leave.
Keep going. Not very good with encouragement, but have confidence. ) You're good.
| FallenAngel6780 chapter 6 . 10/24/2007
I cant wait to see the next part! :P ..
| FallenAngel6780 chapter 3 . 10/20/2007
LOVE IT! you MUST post more. :P ..
| LilsurferSango17 chapter 3 . 10/20/2007
I'm really enjoying this story so far. There's a few kids (on the team) that I haven't quite got sorted out, but that should cahnge with time.
| arisaswordheart chapter 3 . 10/20/2007
Isabella? Hm, is there a hidden message in that? No, I guess not... ;
| arisaswordheart chapter 2 . 10/19/2007
Wow, this is pretty interesting. ;D
Keep the readers in the dark, hm?
| arisaswordheart chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
Hello! You should know me. xD
Anyway, hmm, nice work. Though if it were my teacher, she'd be marking ya off for the beginning and 'said'. She's a hard marker.
Anyway, nice job, though I'm not really sporty person.
Do me a favour? Visit my FP profile? It's lonely here... T_T;