|Reviews for Kaleidoscopic|
| ContemplativeJoyce chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
That was terrific! :)
It inspired me too.
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
I absolutely LOVE the way the rhyme scheme works. Most people are like, "I'm at the end of a line, my thought must end now," but you... No, you just carry the rest of the thought down the the beginning of the next line.
A "kaleidoscope wash of amber and blue" is simply amazing. It's like watching it rain at 2 in the afternoon, when the clouds are just white and the sun reflects off them instead of shining through. It's a sort of wash of amber and blue...
You rock. Never, never stop.
| xfail chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
This is absolutely awesome. The rhythm was dead-on, every word fit perfectly, and the meaning is so... invigorating. Very good job!
| Alice Faraday chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
This poem makes me think of magic and fantasy novels. With an abstract and creative imagination, one could quite vividly picture a sequence of scenes and shots to the reading of this poem. (of course, this is coming from the mouth of a visionary wanna-be-director.) But view it however you want to, it's all around a nice poem. Good job.