Reviews for Synthesis of Hyacinths and Loss
Crafty Butcher chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
lovely. i woulda had the title without "and loss", but awesome all around.
Needa S chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
Great rhymes! Awesome job! Write on and God Bless.
review chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
unlike my "poems," yours are short, sweet, and to the point.

VERY to the point, it seems.

"Do we kiss the ones we love profusely?

Or do we realize now they're out of touch?"

im guessing you like to put things exactly as you perceive them. but good rhyme scheme: the best rhyme scheme is one that you don't notice too much, one that doesn't take away from the meaning behind the words.

and guess what. you're almost at perfection. ;D