|Reviews for Winter Angel|
| mkren2 chapter 35 . 10/4/2013
love it it is a grate story, hope you will write again,
| owlinthenightsky chapter 35 . 7/24/2012
Wow! Please do keep writing!
Amazing story my dear! I absolutely love it!
Please, please, please! Update very soon
I will be favoring and following this baby of yours (:
Gawd. I'm just... I want more c:
| dr3 chapter 35 . 3/28/2012
This story is intense, heartbreaking, fascinating, intriguing ... Please update. ;D
| la-bas chapter 5 . 2/14/2011
I really enjoyed your story; thank you very much for writing it. I do hope it will be continued at some point, or failing that you'll carry on writing something else, since it's so rare to come across storytelling of this quality. I'd love to know how Kirian reconciles himself to the fellari and (of course) where his relationship with Silas is going. I wonder if you had mpreg in mind since there's that emphasis on darklings not reproducing sexually, and yet Kirian's relationship with Silas is clearly unusual and exceptional... but this may be my wishful thinking only!
Kirian and Silas are characters and I'm fascinated by the other darklings and Xamber too. Loathe as I am to suggest taking the focus off the relationship for a while since I love the interactions, I wonder if some more backstory for Silas might be on the agenda? At the moment we seem to know rather more about the mysterious Kirian than the apparently open and straightforward Silas - I'm not sure if this is intentional or not? Also, either I was rushing too much and missed it or there isn't yet that much detail on how the resistance movement got going.
I like the way you invert the dominant/submissive aspects of Kirian and Silas' personalities. One thing that bothered me initially was Kirian's age, given that a mere 8 years of even the worst experiences to someone who's lived for centuries doesn't seem like it ought to be that big a deal, and Kirian also seemed curiously sexually inexperienced for his age. But in later chapters you've given a convincing explanation for why that is.
Many thanks again for writing this. You've given me one of those all-too-rare experiences where I'm competely wrapped up in a story. It's also great to be reminded that there can still be original, edgy and good writing with vampire-like creatures, since I used to love that sort of thing but have become tired of all the dross of late. I'm sure you could publish this if you wanted, with some very light edits in a few places where the word choice doesn't convey quite the right sense.
| lunasea chapter 35 . 1/8/2011
AMAZING! Totally love it with all my heart! and i do hope you continue this. You simply can't not continue writing it. Too good of a story! and i hope that if you do you will keep me updated via email. LOVE IT
| lexi v chapter 35 . 8/7/2010
hi i just thought i'd let you know how fantastic i think winter angel is :)
i read hundreds of stories on FP and very few of them ever give me mental images and emotional reactions like this has, your descriptions, alternate universe, and general ideas are fantastic, better than most published books i've read recently.
i read it last year and failed to review (sorry) and just recently re-found and re-read it. now i'm feeling really sad chapter 36 has never appeared :( i hope you continue posting at some point.
| AsiaLisek chapter 35 . 3/24/2010
i just blasted (trying to pace myself,, but failed) through ch.35, and... wow...
what am amazing, compelling, unique and just brilliant story you're writing!
my most favoritest part.. How you managed to create a s strong uke and a sensitive seme. I absolutely commend you for this!
oh gosh.. please keep writing! absolutely wonderful tale. I can't wait (but will.. ever so patiently) for the next chapter! XD
| Angels-obsession chapter 35 . 9/17/2009
Oh god. I hope you update this soon, or at least update it at some point! T_T I was so sad when I got to the end! I really love this story, and honestly it's the first story in awhile that has me so riveted. It deserves a thousand reviews!
| Mystic Dragon1 chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Love this story! Please keep writing!
| Ish Mish Kiki chapter 35 . 8/26/2009
I very much like your story. It is well paced and each chapter is interesting without giving too much away at the same time. Very nicely done. The language is also very readable and fluid. I really like it, and hope you will update soon.
| Oki3xDoki3 chapter 35 . 8/19/2009
Oh my! I cannot wait for the next chapter release. I treat Winter Angel as a drug. What will happen to Kirian?
If you don't mind me asking, can tou explain Silis image? I know he's blond but, I had moments thinking he'd dominate Kirian...but then again...he's seems submissive himself.
Anywho, update soon please!
Winter Angel is a truly brilliant story!
| xXx.Fallen.Angel.xXx chapter 35 . 7/4/2009
I really like this story and it's characters. I hope you continue writing it as I'm dying to know what happens next!
i hope the next chapter cpmes out soon!
| NyghtRayne chapter 34 . 6/7/2009
wah...you havent updated since jan.? oh man..i hope you dont have writers block with this story...or dont use the site anymore because this story is so good!...I love it and want to know what happens to Kirian and Silas and if Kirian gets the fastening off. And who did all of this, and if the world as they know it ends...so many questions...i hope you continue so that they can be answered. I love this story...PWEASE?
| Weinerdog of Death and Doom chapter 35 . 6/5/2009
omfg. It is currently quarter to twelve in the morning and I haven't slept since midnight last night. This story is so epic it made me stay awake. Um. Yeah, okay, I'm not making any sence. But yeah... I read this and it was awesome... and cute. I can't really say much else than it's one of the best I've read here, and is totally gonna give me strange dreams. Ehehe. Anyway, loved it and will sit here and stare at you in a semi-awkward manner, with fourteen muses sitting on my head, until I get an update. Or maybe I'll go eat cake.
Um, I can sum that all up in: Love story. Want update. Plz? w Sorry for making no sence.
(For who can separate the truth from lies and delusion?)
| Shriken chapter 35 . 3/23/2009