Reviews for Rain
And FOREVER chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Ahh.. rain. I love rain. This poem expresses everything perfectly. Excellent job. It's hard to find work of this type.
Jason Mansmann chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
I hope the rain will wash away the hurt but I dought it. The only way to wash it away may be to tell him. I know you do not want to but he loves you and will not be angry with you. Just give my words a thought please for your own sake.
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
nice work. i like how you applied rain to your peom. puts things in a new perspective
Laura Schiller chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
This is amazing. It's real poetry...the kind you don't find often on this site. I can't write like this. It's free-form, but the words still flow together like music and I can hear the rain falling in every syllable. It's an underappreciated weather condition, not like sunshine that everybody loves, but it deserves some praise as well!