Reviews for Perfect Insanity
megnbryant92 chapter 1 . 11/12/2015
Just wondering if this story will ever be updated? Either way, I very much enjoyed reading it!
KskyeM chapter 15 . 10/17/2011
This is the best chapter of this story! Please write some more as well i want to know what happens :D you are verry talented and should keep writing, I wish to read more from you someday.

~ Skye.
Lexy7432 chapter 14 . 4/12/2010
I like it, and AM ecstatic that you finally updated...Plz continue...
kiwisnake chapter 7 . 4/12/2010
DIE RACHEL! DIE! DIE A MILLION HORRIBLE DEATHS OF A THOUSAND BURNING SUNS IN YELL YOU CHEAP B*!

Kill her off please.

Good story so far. I will keep reading.
Francine Brown chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
FINALLY! Lol, been waiting for an update on this story. Good job. Cant wait for more :D
Luna Turner chapter 11 . 7/11/2008
NO! It's too short! I want more! Please please please update soon!

Grr.

UPDATE!

~Luna Turner
Luna Turner chapter 10 . 6/30/2008
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

: )

I will be so happy!

PLEASE UPDATE!

~Luna Turner
Luna Turner chapter 9 . 6/30/2008
Before work? How old are you?

: )

Sorry.

Anywho- Jason needs to get his act together! This Rachel seems like a beotch, so he needs to forget about her and focus on Lana.
Luna Turner chapter 8 . 6/30/2008
Don't sweat it! I LOVED it!

ONTO ONTO!

: )

~Luna Turner
Luna Turner chapter 7 . 6/30/2008
Minor typos, like you said. Nothing serious.

Umm... Oh, yes. This is something you do A LOT, and it needs fixing.

Here's an example:

"Lana was found badly beaten at her boyfriend's house last night, Jason. She's in the hospital." I shook my head again.

This should be:

"Lana was found badly beaten at her boyfriend's house last night, Jason. She's in the hospital."

I shook my head again. -

Otherwise, it confuses the reader and makes you think Jason's saying it instead of Jake. Now, since you have it so much in your writing, I'm not saying you need to go back and change it all now, just pointing it out for future reference.

other than that- Still awesome!

ONTO-

Yea, you get it.

~Luna Turner
Luna Turner chapter 6 . 6/30/2008
WHOA!

I had to read that last part three times before it sunk in!

Poor Jason.

: (

Still going good!

GOING ONTO THE- well, you know the rest.

~Luna Turner
Luna Turner chapter 5 . 6/30/2008
Hahaha. Loved the ending.

Still going great!

ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

~Luna Turner
Luna Turner chapter 4 . 6/30/2008
First of all- I'm so sorry for not reviewing sooner!

Second of all- No worries, the story is going really well. I like it a lot. You have just the right amount of everything. There is a slight worry, however, that you might be going a little too fast. But I shouldn't say that... seeing as that's my OWN weakness, it would be rather hypocritical. XD

Sorry, I'm rambling.

ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

~Luna Turner
vampirickitty chapter 10 . 6/26/2008
Good story so far. Good writing!
hades.daemon chapter 10 . 6/26/2008
Hey! Well, good luck... :)

Wonderful story, by the way...

:)
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