Reviews for Love Triangle Literally
xPencilsCamerasx chapter 7 . 5/23/2015
She describes me. Exactly. She's...her personality, is almost exactly like mine, when she's not being an ice queen.
Phsychic chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I have read this story soooo many times! I simply HAVE to adore it - it's so perfect!
Isn't that just what every yaoi-fangirl dreams of? to be stuck between two sexy guys who want to ravish each other and you? Ooh... the bliss!
Anyways, thanks a thousand (times infinity) times for this! The first time I read it it made my day, now, the seventieth time I read it... still AWESOME!

just one complaint: please do spell correctly, and go through your stories thoroughly - it REALLY annoys me when people don't bother to correct incorrect words.

all in all THANKS XXXX
ooglemac chapter 10 . 7/8/2012
awesome news! :D can't wait!
artmagus chapter 10 . 2/12/2011
wow! just so good!
i dnt know chapter 9 . 12/26/2010

i love you!

whoever you are!

or wherever you came from!

but i love josh and matthew best!
adaranaelsaldeur chapter 10 . 9/9/2010

[thank you you heeded to the protests!]

adaranaelsaldeur chapter 6 . 9/9/2010
::nods in agreement::

oh me freakin' goosh!

iloveyou whoeever you are!

i realy lurve it...

me thinks it's original to the nth power...

you're great...

i won't say keep it up because i know you will

[-hey i typed it anyways...]
pinkguppie chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
I've only read the first chapter so far - its sweet :)

Just one thing; a story called Literal Love Triangle by Onyx Flight Path was put up on FP last year and as far as I can tell its a carbon copy of your story. Just so you know :)
sophiesix chapter 3 . 9/4/2009
I like how - oh bugger i've forgotten teh MC's name... um... no its gone - oh well, kind of twisted she is, in a hilarious way; she's a loner but she agrees to be in the spotlight, for example. peculiar and hilarious. loved this line: "It was funny… funny but still really hot." that just about summed it up for me! great work :D
magalina chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Hello, Cittywolf.

Your story, Love Triangle Literally, has been nominated in the Best Love Triangle category for the first round of the Looking at the Stars Awards. It will now be considered by a judge, who will determine the semi-finalists for the category. You will be notified again if your story makes it to this round.

If you want your story to be removed from consideration for the award, please reply to this message accordingly.

Congratulations and good luck, The LatS Staff.
abbsi chapter 10 . 6/23/2009
I finished reading this a little while ago, but I thought I'd leave a review for you just to let you know that I thought this was a great, cute little story. :) Although it maybe should be classified as fantasy. :-P
Red.Bunny.Slippers chapter 9 . 2/6/2009
I absolutely love this plot! I am, too, a Yaoi/fangirl and it was delightful to read this story. However, I got one of two constructive critics: First, concerning the story: I would love you if you could expand the story a little bit. The plot and development its actually pretty good, but you could do so much more with it! More interaction between Josh & Matthew, a little more "hotness" around and more action between the characters(why do they love each other?, why they decided to be bi for her?, why does she love them? It's really more than just an obsession with yaoi for her part? For they, it is really love for her, as a persona?) would be extremely well recieved. Secondly, I NEED a sequel. Please, this story has SO much to give. Don't cut it short! I can assure you, you have a loyal reader in me. Anyway, great story, and even if you can't act upon my suggestions, I still love the story! Kudos!
Makayla chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
Did you know that there is a writer named Onyx FLight Path with a first chapter exactly the same as yours?

Nice story by the way _
muffin'sno1 chapter 10 . 11/19/2008
I loved this story, it made me think about whether you act like this which would make me laugh even more or whether you're completely different and you wouldn't like to be in love with two gay guys. Also captured your personality pretty well ;).
Aurora Corona chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
This is a wonderful story so far! I'm hooked!

By the way, I'm absolutely convinced this person copied your story, word for word.

Onyx Flight Path

The title's similar too! Her's is called 'Literal Love Triangle'

Pssht. I hate it when people plagiarise.

Anyways, yeah.

I love your story so far, very creative idea :D


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