Reviews for Love Triangle Literally |
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![]() ![]() ![]() O_O...OMG... really now...no doubt this should be put in humor... im laughing my ass off here... it was so effin hot... |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, im still loving it... i dont usually put comments but heck im reviewing every chapter... i would love to clean up this chapter...though the mistakes werent that bothering, it would still be better to have them cleaned up... |
![]() ![]() ![]() heck...i would be screaming if i saw something like that... and im not sure yet whether out of grossness or fangirl scream... i cant imagine the two gays yet...but still one thing i know...theyre hot while kissing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im loving the lead girl...i just hope she wont be whinny in the future... |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG!That totally got me hooked. I hope the next chapters would keep me hooked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In your email you told me to reply but i cant find your email adress anywhere. so i cant answer your questions. send me it so i can. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG she sounds like an ugly girl with low esteem and no soecial skills, and I DEFINETLY believe that she can be a yaoi fangirl, because everything points at that. It's rather the opposite kind of person that's unlikely to be a yaoi fangirl. Very exciting story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i loved the story... it was so cool. ah i kind of feel weird that i like it, but now i want two gay guys ah. youll have me dreaming about this for long time hahaha lol. the way you wrote it was good, short and sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah. That was so hot. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() brilliant |
![]() ![]() this was so good. you should update like now |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY SHIT! This is the most unique story i have ever read! I was actually laughing! HAHA! Really, i'm serious, this is totally weird-but appreciated. I'm a Yaoi fangirl too, and i gotta tell you, i wouldn't mind something like this happening to me. Hehehe! I wouldn't have ever thought of a story like this, because, honestly, when a the lead girl likes two guys at once, she's so confused that it's annoying, and she seems totally selfish. But that didn't happen here, she easily accepted that she really was falling for two guys. AH, anyway, that thing about how she tried to like girls because in her opinion same sex relationships would be so much more interesting than normal relationships totally made me (almost) piss myself. HAHAH! But, seriously, was that the end? No sex scenes? (Sorry, but i'm a perv too) And that thing when she gets to kiss Matthew then Josh? Whew, that was hot. Loved it. Anyway, this story made my day! HEHEHEH! PLEASE MAKE MORE INTERESTING STORIES WITH UNIQUE PLOT LINES THAT WOULD MAKE ME ROLL ON THE FLOOR LAUGHING. I bow to you. -Jessi |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol; funy story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy cow! That was the best! Can I make love to you? After reading a story as was presented I feel compelled to stalk you! Of course, I can't because I'm too busy- BUT I CAN AND WILL TOTALLY WHORE OUT YOUR STORY! WHOO-PA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, i liked the concept, but I felt like there could have been more interactions. Like a separate josh or Matt encounter that deepened the relationship or something. overall, very likable |