Reviews for Breaking A Promise |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god! i just read your story! it is great! i cant wait for the next chapter. you should definitely send me a sneak peek! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! How will she tell Roxy she's fallen for her bother? Oh dear. I LOVE THIS STORY! ~da HiPpOoFdOoM~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() love chapter 30! i'm glad tyler finally kissed roxy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() She is SO into him. ~da HiPpOoFdOoM~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() She's going to fall for Braiden isn't she. Tut tut. ~da HiPpOoFdOoM~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was kinda confused, you said Roxy was wearing jeans and a t-shirt, but then you went on and said that she would look good in trackies and a hoodie. Did you mean to say she LOOKED like the kind of girl that would look good in anything? Sorry I'm not explaining myself well. OH, and BTW I live in England so if you wanted any suggestions about how they do things out here, just ask! ~da HiPpOoFdOoM~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. I have to say I'm hooked, it shows promise. :) ~da HiPpOoFdOoM~ |
![]() ![]() exploring. woow, so many good chapters :P this one stood out, partly because i like the parts with braidon in it :P btw, what does Non ho mai voluto a fine mean? i tried to look it up in a translator :/ no luck. |
![]() ![]() and Yay summer (; |
![]() ![]() exploring. Wow, awesome chapter! it actually made me cry a little. it is very good ( keep it up. i cant wait to read the rest of it :P |
![]() ![]() exploring. um...you write really good ( keep it up! I am enjoying every bit of it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gwah? No Braidon? Nu! You need more Braidon in your chapters! Now, I know this might sound a little demanding but I want more. I just love your story! You make drama, humor and romance go together like chocolate syrup and colored sprinkles on a hot fudge sundae! You make it sweet and addicting. So, sweet-tart, I want more! Of course, go ahead and take your time (I know college can be a little stressful) and make the next chapter your best one yet! But I demand more Braidon, more flirting and more chapters. La-la-la-love, Chicky :) |
![]() ![]() Thank you thank you thank you for updating! But where is Braidon? hehe. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it, its really good so far and i think its really good matching and it totally surprised me when you said Tyler use to like Ella that was totally surprising fether's hey r u going to write more soon? |