Reviews for mondays and maybes
wayfaringstrangers chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
I love this piece. It's just


He's with her, but you can't

let him go because you know

that YOU're the one that is

meant to be with him; not her.

I felt this too many times.

(My best friend was incredibly

stubborn and kept bouncing from

girl to girl, but he never

realized what was right in front

of him for years.)
Kusuriuri chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
wonderful :3
Andrea Lotte chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
Ooh, I like this. I love the last line: mondays and maybes. It's got a lovely lilt to it. Anyway, the only real complaint I would have is the second-to-last verse. It doesn't sound as dreamy or poetic as the rest. The agitation is clear but perhaps you could make it slightly more lyrical, like the rest of it is? But other than that it's a really nice poem. Good job!