Reviews for retail therapy
the prophet apathetic chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Ha, I work retail. There is so much truth to this and that's why I adore it. 25 words of absolute truth.
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Wow this is such a good metaphor. At first I thought of buying presents & keeping someone a friend, but I suppose it could simply be debasing yourself to please them.

There is a lot packed in these 3 short lines - the action, the character's justification, and the consequence. The brevity really adds to the toughness of the message: no buts, 'retail therapy' simply doesn't help.

Really enjoyed it :)
lovelaced chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
I cant believe this hasnt been reviewed yet! I liked it, it was simple and yet I could feel the frusteration behind it. Great job.

Oh, & thank you for reviewing my poetry. I'm sorry I took so long to get back to you.

Cant wait to read more,

-Sapphire