Reviews for The Price
H chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
I wish there was a like button for stories, seeing as I have nothing notable to say but still feel this story deserves a review
Bespelled chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Hello! I've read your stories about Thanatos and Aeryn, and I absolutely loved them. I'm a complete sucker for well-written supernatural romances - especially one's that are 'out of the box', so to speak. :)

The first part of the story from the prince's point of view was well-written. It was the second part however that really struck me. I loved how you portrayed the girl in the story. The way she saw her insanity but could do nothing about it was so poignantly heartrending. I felt such overwhelming sympathy for her.

I also adored how you played the 'misunderstandings' between both characters. How the prince thought she hated him for what he'd done, and how she thought he was disgusted after what she always did. However, like I implied earlier, I think the first part, though well-written isn't up to par with the second part. It didn't draw as much of a reaction from me. Perhaps narrate a specific situation where the prince interacts with his insane lover?

(Lol. I didn't realize how odd that last sentence sounded till I reread it.)

But other than that - brilliant. Hope to see from you more. :)