Nate loved the girls as much as he used the perfume bottles to remind him of them. I am confused whether it was some other girl on his bed or the same girl he was about to propose marriage to?

I'm slightly confused (emphasis on the slightly) by the ending, but I hope I get it now. (: Other than that, I like the use of perfumes to portray personality - great, great, great. (: Wonderful writing and I'm really glad somebody added it to our c2. (:

I agree with Andrea Lotte. I think it's really good how each girl has a different scent. Good job!

I really like the way this ended, and how each girl had a scent of their own. Smells really do bring back strong memories, and it's really great how you used it to make each of the girls different. Good job! I really enjoyed it.