Reviews for Bouquet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'd take out the word "though", but other than that, great piece! I don't find it disgusting at all... captures how I feel recently when someone offers me flowers -.- (not that that happens too often but it did *sighs*) Anyway, I love the brevity and simplicity in this. Good job :) |
![]() ![]() I love it, with the whole nature thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the headstrong attitude and the powerful message. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can never say this much in so few lines. I bow down to you- you don't waste a word. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For something disgusting, it was very well written. Nice, short, and a bit bitter. Doesn't need much else. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww... that's so nice. I love Magnolias; the best trees, really. "stealing from nature" - now that brings on a different perspective on the "let's pick a flower" impulse. makes you pause. really good insight into another person, don't you think? |
![]() ![]() ![]() god you're good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() again. this is absolutley wonderful. and i must say, the author's note is great as well :) peace and love ~ h.p. warble p.s. yet another favorite... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this poem too. -Blood |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting theme. You could be more consice with the words "though,/because"; perhaps you could get rid of them. This poem is very unique and the ending, which was not at all what I expected, was like a breath of fresh air-fresh point of view. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. fantastic viewpoint with that one. I can't think of anyone I know (personally, at least) that would think about someone stealing from nature right off the bat. fabulous! thanks for R&R-ing my haiku! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, that's so sad. Great poem. Very original. Nice work. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, i just love that last line. brilliant... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think it's disgusting... Heh. I think there's something about your writing... it's so simple and yet... I find it very moving... I liked this one. |