Reviews for Bouquet
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
I'd take out the word "though", but other than that, great piece! I don't find it disgusting at all... captures how I feel recently when someone offers me flowers -.- (not that that happens too often but it did *sighs*)

Anyway, I love the brevity and simplicity in this. Good job :)
CCPerson chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
I love it, with the whole nature thing.
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
i love the headstrong attitude and the powerful message.
kit feral chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
I can never say this much in so few lines.

I bow down to you- you don't waste a word.
Anesther chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
For something disgusting, it was very well written.

Nice, short, and a bit bitter. Doesn't need much else.
FromMyBackyard chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
aww... that's so nice.

I love Magnolias; the best trees, really.

"stealing from nature" - now that brings on a different perspective on the "let's pick a flower" impulse. makes you pause. really good insight into another person, don't you think?
tonight we storm chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
god you're good.
Doxology chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
again. this is absolutley wonderful. and i must say, the author's note is great as well :)

peace and love

~ h.p. warble

p.s. yet another favorite...
Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
I liked this poem too.

-Blood
Nemonus chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
Very interesting theme. You could be more consice with the words "though,/because"; perhaps you could get rid of them. This poem is very unique and the ending, which was not at all what I expected, was like a breath of fresh air-fresh point of view.
gigglebug chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
wow. fantastic viewpoint with that one.

I can't think of anyone I know (personally, at least) that would think about someone stealing from nature right off the bat. fabulous!

thanks for R&R-ing my haiku!
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
Aww, that's so sad. Great poem. Very original. Nice work. :)

~Twilight Starr~
Ecomsay chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
that was beautiful
little boy on her bike chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
wow, i just love that last line. brilliant...
Raiyune chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
I don't think it's disgusting... Heh. I think there's something about your writing... it's so simple and yet... I find it very moving... I liked this one.
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