|Reviews for kinetics of self|
| NothingMoreNothingLess chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
I really like the rhyming you've got going here, and I love the title. The only thing I saw is that this part (what more there is to me,/what more there is to be.) might need question marks. (unless that was intentional. -shrugs-) Over all, this was beautiful, and the last two lines were amazing.