Reviews for Blood Red Roses
SundayMorning73 chapter 11 . 10/24/2014
I'm not sure if this chapter is switched with the last one but the previous chapter, Althea mentions taking care of herself and being able to wander about the mansion and alone when Damien refers to Charley attacking her, which hadn't happened yet. Just figured I'd point that out.
bettyboop1124 chapter 11 . 4/21/2013
I read that you are re-posting. I hope that means there is more to come. I was enjoying this very much. Also, on your profile I saw that you have a third book, Blood Sweat and Tears, where is the second?
Erstel 908iu chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
Raya47 chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
like your story looking forward to what happens next
Random1 chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
the story line is great but there r just too many typos to read and make sense of which really distracts from the story. running it through spellcheck on word should get rid of most of the spelling errors and getting a beta should fix the grammar mistakes. at present it is just too time consuming to interpret what your saying even though it is a good story.

Regards and hoping for a great final copy
Ellybeth chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Your story seemed interesting but you have may too many grammatical errors to try and read through.
Devilish Kisses chapter 17 . 5/15/2011
Oh no :(
Charlee Rayne chapter 4 . 1/1/2011
ew... hygeine?
Kinjirareta Ai chapter 25 . 9/14/2010
i love this story! It is absolutely amazing! You are a fantastic writer, and i hope to be able to buy yuor book one day! good luck on the publishing!
failwithpride chapter 25 . 7/25/2010
i strongly suggest correcting the many spelling errors in this story.

it gets really annoying when you read this and there are heaps of mistakes.
browneyedcolly chapter 25 . 7/12/2010
yaay haappy ending!
LittleMissSmiles chapter 4 . 5/27/2010
The story is great but you really really really need to fix your spelling.

The spelling mistakes are really obviuos and degreade what could be a magnificent story.

Overall I loved it :))
blackrule chapter 27 . 5/26/2010
is there any way for us to read the edited version? I would love to see what's changed! :D
anonymous chapter 13 . 3/30/2010
LOVE the story, only setback is the bad grammar.

Bubbles1357 chapter 14 . 3/25/2010
Pretty good story, but did your beta die? You have done pretty well on grammar, but your spelling needs a lot of work. You might run it through Word, proof read it, then re-post. Other than the spelling and some general typos, you're doing pretty well though. :)
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