Reviews for Dreamscape
Thenardier chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
The last line seems rather unconventional, yet it blends in perfectly with the entire haiku. I don't know, but I feel extreme sadness in this haiku, and yet, a sense of profound hope. I like it.
Kusje chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
The last line made the haiku more... placed, in a way, and yet, made me rethink what I read.

The first two lines recall my thoughts about a type of sanctuary or hideaway place, and the use of 'heaven' really places that in.

And yet, the last line integrated into it really made me think about it.

'Washed in a no-color dye' reminded me of something being bland or vague, possibly. Or maybe it's not colored?

Great job at this :)
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
I really like this piece. Your word choice is perfect. I love the last line. Great job! Thanks for the review. I'm adding this to my favorites.
Basara chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
a dream blooms in the place of clouds in one's mind...

nice...
this is britt chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
quite beautiful. nice job.