Aww, I loved it. It was narrated beautifully.

Hey Shiro.

Finally got around to reading this. You're somethin' else, you know?

It's got its structural/technical/mechanical problems, but you get the emotion out there, and much of the dialog is pretty good.

See ya.

im like the 2nd review? but why?your story is awesome! there should be more people reading this one! its kinda a cliche story but still awesome nonetheless..i really like it! just one thing..how old is both of them actually?

cause you stated adult? and i dont know but the way they behaving are not that adult..haha..

but i love it..i love how its like typical but still can make my heart tug as i read the words in the letter..i just love typical happy ending cause it makes me happy..and who wants to read on story that have sad ending rite? and they laugh at the titanic? thats like the most funniest statement of the year..but kinda know the logic in it..haha..

anyway, great story, and great character..i love how you wrote Jamie but you should elaborate more on Eden i guess..but to think again,its kinda equal footing on this story i guess..but i just guess that Eden is the man in the relationship is it? hahaha cause being the mean and cool guy that he is.._~

aw, that was so sweet...turns out they were both stupid, but oh well at least they figured things out in the end. Thanks for sharing the story!