Reviews for Legalised Robbery
Gemma Lovell chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
Ooh, I really like this! Sorry it took me so long to review, by the way. I like how you used informal language. Your rhyme scheme reminded me a bit of that poem "Macavity the Mystery Cat" by T.S. Elliot, which is pretty cool. Your English is still doing really well. Great job!

Love, Gemma
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Great poem. It was sort of funny even though these days it's kind of true.

Twilight Starr
i am valentine chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
i liked this, and you rhyme really well