Reviews for The Sun Also Rises
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
I really like this. It was a great poem...

I was attracted by the title. The Sun Also Rises is a book by Ernest Hemmingway. It was terrible. I hated it. But your poem looked much more pleasant. )

And it was. Wonderful. Beautiful. Lovely. Unique.

Good work. )
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
I enjoyed this piece. It’s a very tangible poem—the description of warm cement really leapt out at me and seemed very real to me. I really liked the first two lines, too. They grabbed my attention immediately. Keep up the good work!