|Reviews for The Sun Also Rises|
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
I really like this. It was a great poem...
I was attracted by the title. The Sun Also Rises is a book by Ernest Hemmingway. It was terrible. I hated it. But your poem looked much more pleasant. )
And it was. Wonderful. Beautiful. Lovely. Unique.
Good work. )
| sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
I enjoyed this piece. It’s a very tangible poem—the description of warm cement really leapt out at me and seemed very real to me. I really liked the first two lines, too. They grabbed my attention immediately. Keep up the good work!