|Reviews for Untitled Love|
| Bubbles o O o chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Wow! This really is amazing! I guess u have some strong feeling's huh? It's ok, and I should know! My girlfreind had feelings for me as I did her, but she didn't know it at the time, because she thought I was straight!
But you did an amazing job!
Keep it up! _
Bubbles o O o
| Sahk chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Wow... I really like your poetry. I'm not so sure about the bottle idea, but that's perhaps because I've never been in love. I understand taking chances, and I love the falling and floating. And all of it's expressed so well. Good job.
| HellHeartedlyBent chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
very short and pretty piece. thoroughly enjoyed however.
however, i think that when in love, its really us who's in the bottle, with the rest of the world outside.
i dont know, what do you think?
| ThisThingCalledLife chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Your poem makes me sad... probably because I have never really been in love...
I know it's not really my place to tell what to do but in the last line "Hoping" is kind of awkward... what if you made it "And hope" instead
| softer side of apples chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
CLOUD NINE! I LOVE WHAT YOU WRITE AND HOW YOU WRITE IT DRAWS ME IN TO YOUR WORLD.
| ethereal writer chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Wow thats so good.
| theThinker chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
great poem... i loved it! I felt horrible while reading it maybe thats because instead of floating i fell... good poem anyway i hope youll be kind enough to return the review!
THINK before you ACT! but ACT regardless of what you THINK!