Reviews for Untitled Love
Bubbles o O o chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Wow! This really is amazing! I guess u have some strong feeling's huh? It's ok, and I should know! My girlfreind had feelings for me as I did her, but she didn't know it at the time, because she thought I was straight!

But you did an amazing job!

Keep it up! _

Bubbles o O o
Sahk chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Wow... I really like your poetry. I'm not so sure about the bottle idea, but that's perhaps because I've never been in love. I understand taking chances, and I love the falling and floating. And all of it's expressed so well. Good job.
HellHeartedlyBent chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
very short and pretty piece. thoroughly enjoyed however.

however, i think that when in love, its really us who's in the bottle, with the rest of the world outside.

i dont know, what do you think?
ThisThingCalledLife chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Your poem makes me sad... probably because I have never really been in love...

I know it's not really my place to tell what to do but in the last line "Hoping" is kind of awkward... what if you made it "And hope" instead
softer side of apples chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
CLOUD NINE! I LOVE WHAT YOU WRITE AND HOW YOU WRITE IT DRAWS ME IN TO YOUR WORLD.
ethereal writer chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Wow thats so good.
theThinker chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
great poem... i loved it! I felt horrible while reading it maybe thats because instead of floating i fell... good poem anyway i hope youll be kind enough to return the review!

-theThinker-

THINK before you ACT! but ACT regardless of what you THINK!