Reviews for say something
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
I can see how you were inspired by the song. I like how it starts out sort of calm in the first stanza and then builds up until the end. The last line fits perfectly.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
aw :'( heartbreaking. a truly "dearly beloved, are you listening?" moment. i love it. and the say something repeated brought me back into the poem everytime. it wasnt overused which is great. my favorite part was, "say something!

waves, waves, the shoreline on the other side

clear as day to these green eyes"

thnx for writing deary
Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
This was adorable. I really liked how each time the "say something" became more and more fierce. The last lines really tied it all together too, how your telling them but they won't listen.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Cute poem. It sad how some people find themself unable to listen.

I like your penname.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a brilliant day.

Twilight Starr