Reviews for Place
An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
The itallics and the normal text don't really seem to fit with one another until the end. I think this could be shortened so tha the theme doesn't get lost in redundant and unncessary lines.
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
nice work. keep wriitn
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
I like this. It's great. I think it was very creative and original. Good work. )
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Awesome poem.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Thanks for your review of my story "Consequences of a Happy Ending". I appreciate it.

Have a wonderful day.

Twilight Starr
vaudeville summers chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
The language is absolutely fantastic! Thislove. The style is especially great too.

"I want you..

To fall from the top it's not like to have wings, to fall from the top it's as if you were in a roller-coaster and you wanna come down from that cloud shaped dreams though you don't know how to dream..

That place is..

I promise to smile on saying goodbye on the other hand promise me you forget me.

... my heart."

wonderful :)

Deanna