Reviews for Pursuing Happines
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
This was breathtakinlg entrancing and well spun. It gives an almost sneer to the said man who is all alone...

"head them my quest is forlorn" the head should be "heed".

Good story...

the Stranger in the moonlight
the face in the window chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
Fiction? Wow, this is amazing. You should write more of this style. Did this really happy?

Rowan.
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
konban wa

I definitely think you should continue and turn this into a story. My favorite part was the style: present tense is often difficult to write well - not to mention many people forget and keep switching tenses. You writing here is excellent! I can't wait to hear more from this story. :)

Zaijen

-Shan-
Core Satiated chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Loved the concept, enjoyed the story and my favorite thing about this was the way that happiness is presented in perception. The depth is phenomenal. You never disappoint.
Elle dont tu lis les histoires chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
very philosophical and sophisticated. i particularly like the style in which it's written.

one thing i don't like though, is that it's a little cliche.

otherwise, very good job, i really like it.
Alice Sleeps chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
I love the imagery and the seemingly mundane topic that you've brought life to.