Reviews for melt
lollipop.memories chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
to quote you, "you should give yourself more credit." i really liked this poem. :) that's why its on my favorite list. ;)
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
Very good and I like how you ended with a question that makes the reader think about themselves, and relfect. As for me I am not quite sure what I am, but I guess that I am "young" and in another year or so will find out. Great job on this one, yet again )
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
Wonderful poem.

~Twilight Starr~
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
good work
Through Glass Eyes chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
I like it. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself.
J.P. Woods chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
It was fine. You are way to critical of yourself. It wasn't your best but not every work can be Putlitzer Prize Material.