|Reviews for Hope|
| Tatharwen chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
Very interesting...it reminds me a bit of 'The Giver' in tone and ideas, but you've made it all your own. Is there any possibility of a follow-up chapter? A further expansion of the ideas you've got going in here would be fascinating. :-) I know I get picky sometimes, but you had a couple spelling errors in here that distracted from the text. Overall I liked it, though... keep writing!
PS You should consider enabling anonymous reviewers- you'll get more reviews.
| Lynaeve chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
Nice job. I really liked this piece and was disappointed that it ended so quickly. It would make a great beginning to what could be a very interesting story.
| Soul Decay chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
It seems like this would make a good Prolouge to a longer story, but as it is it makes you think. i like it very much so.