Reviews for First Love
Islaa chapter 4 . 9/1/2011
This story looks to be good. You should update
Winter92 chapter 4 . 8/24/2008
I hope he finds someone new
Bibi.Love chapter 4 . 1/17/2008
more more more
Valkyre chapter 4 . 1/5/2008
DANG
Kadekksys chapter 4 . 10/29/2007
this was a good chapter, but the transition from the last one to this was kind of choppy. The end of the last chapter made it seem like they were going to try to work it out, and then all of a sudden we're a few years into the future and they're divorced. Also, I wish your chapters were longer. You have so much to work with and develop. I would love to have more to read!
OoohLookACat chapter 4 . 10/28/2007
ooh well that did get a tad bit more interesting

can't wait for more

izzie
Moonlit Promise chapter 3 . 10/28/2007
Wow, violent sex. . I wanna see what happens with Audrey and James. o.o

So, update soon.
OoohLookACat chapter 3 . 10/25/2007
interesting story

the plot line is interesting

can't wait for more

izzie
curlyk03 chapter 3 . 10/25/2007
interesting.

kind of lost, but i suppose you'll clarify.

update soon.
Glossy Girl chapter 3 . 10/24/2007
Wow, intense! Update soon! Sex is better than violence, I suppose. Even though that's like rough sex, lol. Good story! Continue! _
Kadekksys chapter 2 . 10/24/2007
love it! sorry, that's all I've got cause I'm late for class! ah! cant wait for more, though!
Uninvited chapter 2 . 10/24/2007
The first chapter was so cute. Why did James and Audrey split up in the first place?
Kadekksys chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
aw, i like it. its so sweet. the age difference in kinda creepy- she's so young- but other than that, i liked it.