Reviews for First Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story looks to be good. You should update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope he finds someone new |
![]() ![]() ![]() more more more |
![]() ![]() ![]() DANG |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a good chapter, but the transition from the last one to this was kind of choppy. The end of the last chapter made it seem like they were going to try to work it out, and then all of a sudden we're a few years into the future and they're divorced. Also, I wish your chapters were longer. You have so much to work with and develop. I would love to have more to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh well that did get a tad bit more interesting can't wait for more izzie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, violent sex. . I wanna see what happens with Audrey and James. o.o So, update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story the plot line is interesting can't wait for more izzie |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. kind of lost, but i suppose you'll clarify. update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, intense! Update soon! Sex is better than violence, I suppose. Even though that's like rough sex, lol. Good story! Continue! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! sorry, that's all I've got cause I'm late for class! ah! cant wait for more, though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first chapter was so cute. Why did James and Audrey split up in the first place? |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, i like it. its so sweet. the age difference in kinda creepy- she's so young- but other than that, i liked it. |