Reviews for Simple Question
Josh Harris chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
The end made me think in a terribly depressing way, like an optimistic forest fire.

Did that maker sense?


I liked it, though.

Leaves of Labefaction chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
You know, again the last line is my favorite. You might work on the rhythm a little; extending the 3rd and 4th lines maybe, but if you can't really do anything it is fine the way it is. Good poem!
the.alaskan.musical.pig chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
I dont completely understand the question... but i luvz the last line ::sendshugthroughcomputer:: have a cookie to, im in a good mood today!