Reviews for Ugly Duckling Turned Swan
Jenny-A chapter 8 . 10/25/2011
This seems quite interesting.

I'm following your story now. I'll write a better review later.

One thing you do well is suspense, you don't give the reader everything and you leave us handing on in interest.

Good stuff- Jen
MimiItou chapter 8 . 10/24/2011
OMG AWESOME I LOVE IT SO MUCH! Please update soon!
Wanderingreader chapter 8 . 10/16/2011
WOW! I hope you update this or you will post your link in inkpop. This story hooked me almost instantly!

I want to know what will happen to Savannah and Layton...

*Speechless* so pardon me for my short review. Just want to read the rest of the chapters.
sophiesing chapter 8 . 10/16/2011
Amazing story so far. I've never read the original one but I love this. It's a pretty unique story line, and I'm very curious. I can't wait to read more and to find out who knows about her identity
Nelsonstudenthigh09 chapter 8 . 10/9/2011
such a good story please dont stop writng :) i am loving it i dont want it to end i want to know who knows and i want her and layton to do something and she has to take mercedes done lol :) please update
Sophie chapter 8 . 10/6/2011
Omg I can't wait until the next chapter.

I love all the characters, they're so intriguing.

Can't wait to find out what happens now that she's been discovered!
ChaEL16 chapter 8 . 10/5/2011
I knew it! Just about that little statement, about how Layton can remember everything. Nice, foreshadowing! Oh, this is soooo exciting. I can't wait to read what happens next. And I get why you change it from the original one now. It's so different, in a really good way by the way.
ChaEL16 chapter 4 . 10/5/2011
Btw, why did you change the original one? It was great and all, and it revealed more about what happened really when she was with her grandma. So what made you decide to change it? The story is still rather good, but it kinda became shorter, shorter than it already is, on the the original one. I really hope that the future chapters would be longer.
A-new-colour chapter 8 . 10/2/2011
was that note from Layton? that'll be cool... and kinda weird cuz he said he wouldn't hesitate in making a move on her...

this is actually a really cool story...

the plot's not exactly original but isn't cliched either :)

for a change :S

and well, the usual:

update soon :) XD

oh! and i reALly want to find out what happened between nathan and savannah..



peace! XD :P

Starcrazed chapter 8 . 9/27/2011
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter
Drama Ensues chapter 8 . 8/28/2011
OMG! I love this story so far! Please continue!
Germany chapter 8 . 8/24/2011
Not bad so far :)
N-butterfly chapter 8 . 8/20/2011

So Ava asks Savannah to walk with her, and yet it seems that Savannah's the one who needed something in her locker? hmm

I almost kind of hate Savannah right now; she didn't do ANYTHING to help the bullied freshman, and yet she thinks she's so 'different' from Mercy and her groupies... smh

But this chap was okay; wonder where you're going with the story though...
Smartgirl94 chapter 8 . 8/20/2011
This is really interesing story and please update soon and I think that Layton know its her :)
AllTheWayUp12 chapter 8 . 8/19/2011
Kay, so first of all: I am for Team Nathan AND Layton.

Second, YOU NEED TO UPDATE. Because I really like this story. :P

And as for the note, I'm guessing Gizelle. But if you're planning a twist, I'm guessing Layton or Nathan.

NATHAN. Kay, I'm loving Nathan so far. Yep, they say nice guys finish last, but I am so over the badboy thing. (lol, I'm so weird) I am looking forward to knowing what the hell Nathan did.

But if you never update, we will never know, right? SO UPDATE!

Please and thank you! :)
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