Reviews for Ugly Duckling Turned Swan
SweetlilSunshine chapter 5 . 11/12/2012
interesting, please continue this.
Ann1423 chapter 5 . 11/10/2012
Hi,pleaaase carry this on! this is an amazing story and so breathtakingly refreshing from all the other stuff out here on fictionpress! I really wish she'd tell the school she was savannah though :(
rasetsuyukino chapter 5 . 10/28/2012
Yeah I know it was discontinued and all but could you please... re-continue it? Please, Im doing virtual puppydog eyes here
DeadlyKitten2021 chapter 5 . 9/30/2012
when i read the end of this chapter i wanted to throw the computer lolz i was like "no why'd u end it there!" XP Loved it _
Guest chapter 5 . 8/12/2012
I love it! update soon!
effortless-inelegance chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
What you've written of this story totally blew me away! And I've read A LOT, so this is a huge compliment coming from me, and it's completely honest. I'm adding this to my favs and putting it on my alerts list. I'm loving where you're going with this so far, and will squeal like a little girl on her birthday when you update ;) Oh fuck... I just remembered you said this is discontinued :/
... Well my happy balloon just deflated. Poop it!
... dang, now I don't know what to say. Maybe beg you to update? Although I'm sure I'm the last pitiful fan in a long line of many... PWEEEASE UPDATE!
-randomly yours,
Grammar
sunshine chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
I didn't expect to see Layton's POV. But it's interesting!
sunshine chapter 2 . 7/20/2012
Oooh rich grandmother. I like!
sunshine chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
awwww... i feel so sorry for savannah.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/30/2012
Awww, man... This story had me hooked. I love it.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/28/2012
can anyone tell me what her new account name is? thanks and I wish she'd just stuck to this account or told us what her new one is.
AmoreJess chapter 7 . 5/20/2012
I've followed this story from the very beginning and to be honest, I was really disappointed that it's discontinued. It annoyed me to no end when you kept changing the story. I'll be reading the other Ugly Ducklig Turned Swan on your new account and I really hope you don't keep changing it. Anyway, sorry to be rude but I figured you'd wanna hear honest reviews. Good luck with your new account!
Littlemslulu chapter 6 . 5/17/2012
So disappointed that you dropped this story. Everything is just starting to get interesting. :(
Toni chapter 7 . 4/2/2012
I was so excited when it popped up on my email "new chapter". And when i saw this, I almost cried. :(
Reader chapter 7 . 4/2/2012
I have to be honest girl...

If you want to be a writer...make sure at this early stage you know what you are doing. You changed this so many times promising readers this...and that...

Yes, you are really disappointing.
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