Reviews for Can't wake up
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
Great poem.

Twilight Starr
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
good work. keep writing
Through Glass Eyes chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Amazing job. You should have made it a little more descriptive though to make a better picture but I still loved it.
Almost-human chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
I like the theme, but your language was very etherial with little concrete imagery. I think it would be a lot stronger with more descriptive imagery to balance out the more symbolic stuff.
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
Very nice. There's good cohesion and atmosphere in this poem. I like your use of repetition and half other-worldly tones in the subject.
jojoba-music-girl chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
Wow, this is truly amazing! I felt some kind of insecureness, yet certainty while reading this, as if I was the main character herself. Great job!
Oracle of Destiny chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
This is fantastic. I liked how you played with the words to portray a vivid image and also a very profound meaning. Well done xD!