|Reviews for gone|
| AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
aw. that was really sad. i hope your mom is ok
nice work and it isn't your fault
| creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
again, wow. yay! (if you didnt tell me your mom is dead, i dont know what to say. i hope this is figurative). anyways i love your style in this, and how you describe your mom in the first and second stanzas is great. luv ya babe :)
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
So sad, but I can kinda relate that's how I feel about Bob because of the war, I've lost him before I could really conect with him and let him know that his baby sister does care about him.
| J.P. Woods chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
Wow you said it was not going to be peaches and cream. So it looks like we can both vent to the computer. I enjoyed it and i hope you are ok because i don't know i am just a jittery person
| lymli chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
I really like this, the meaning of this is powerful, and the imagery is nice, the whole poem is good, you know, my favorite parts " no! let her go!
let me take her back!
there was not enough time
to let her know that I truly cared.
tick. tick. tick.
the demons held her wrists
the wedding was over.
mommy was gone…" and the last lines were so touched..
ps: I like the things you wrote in your profile, specially the third paragraph "no one talks to (h)im
about how he lives..." is it your poem too?