Reviews for Opposite Ends of The Spectrum
goanywhere chapter 14 . 1/22/2012
Have I mentioned how much I like your story. Usually by now, both parties have admitted their feelings, but then again, we don't know what's going on with Matthew.
goanywhere chapter 10 . 1/22/2012
I love this. I would love to see this in Matthew's point of view. That'd be interesting.
goanywhere chapter 4 . 1/22/2012
I'm so excited to see how this story ends. The plot is so...twisted. It's different. I like it :)
D-Mish chapter 30 . 1/19/2012
I dont know if I've read this before but just read it again, so cute. Not sure if I really cared about a baby being born (how insensitive of me) but all the characters are so cute - I was even warming to Chris. Great writing!
Kaydence Sparks Le chapter 30 . 1/19/2012
Such an amazing story :) You're deffo one of the best authors on here :) Thanks for sharing your stories :)
CynthiRaah chapter 30 . 1/19/2012
Love this story! Definitely worth reading :)
halamadrid chapter 30 . 1/17/2012
A beautiful story! Thanks for posting!
anatidaephobiac chapter 30 . 1/13/2012
I really enjoyed this story - spent all day reading it!

My main tip for improvement would be to focus a little more on the continuity of details.. one instance that comes to mind is when they have their flour war, and Aaron mentions the flour that gets all over their hair and clothes, but then it is not really addressed again. Since it was not brought up again, I got the impression that they were walking around the hospital after their 6-hour drive still covered in flour.. and while that may have been the case, I would think they might have gotten some comments or at least some odd looks about it. At times, the story also seemed a bit far-fetched, but that somewhat fit in with the emotional extremes of the characters, as they both had strong personalities and opinions.

Overall, I thought you did a really great job. I won't waste my time reading an entire story if I don't think it's worth it, but I really liked your writing style and I found that the story was very well written. I also enjoyed that the character relationship progressed slowly - it made the story much more believable. Awesome job! :)
Rebecka F chapter 30 . 1/8/2012

I absolutely loved this story. It was so well-written and had a lot of details in it. You are a very good author.

Thanks for keeping the story up, despite the plagarism, I'd be mad if I couldn't finish reading the story.

Take care, and continue to write and share your fantasy to the world!

Guest chapter 30 . 1/6/2012
love this sooo much!
VTDark chapter 30 . 1/6/2012
wow! it's finished. Thanks for the read. :)
heyitsmedemi chapter 23 . 1/2/2012
OMGGGGGG you wont believe this but wayy before i went to your page , i always imagined Matt as Sean Farris , i find this amazing lol , awesome story i love c:
Molly Raesly chapter 30 . 12/27/2011
This is fantastic. Thank you so much for writing this. It made my night. I haven't been this caught up Ina story in a while. I had forgotten how great that feels. Thanks.
Danielle chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Mary chapter 30 . 12/23/2011
I really, really liked this story. If a story can make a person cry (like it made me)it's a sign that the author has done a good job. You managed to weave together a story that was attention grabbing and well thought out. Thank you for writing with such emotion and life. I read it pretty much all in one go, and it is now 4:35 in the morning. Thank you :)
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