|Reviews for Opposite Ends of The Spectrum|
| Be My Valentine chapter 14 . 2/24/2015
I reviewed this story a long time ago, where I remember sobbing my heart out because of Matthew Valentine (a surname I heartily approve of) and his dad coming round to her house whilst she was having a "domestic" (I think that's the term I used.) I cried so much, that I think I stopped reading it and never came back. Until now. I really admire what you're doing here, you have skill with words, but I notice Aaron is painted in the "damsel-in-distress" trope a lot. Like she gets stabbed in the gut, Matthew's there to save her, she's about to be raped in an alleyway, Matthew's there to save her, she breaks down in detention, only Matthew's there to witness this moment of weakness, thereby making her more in debt to him.
"Damsel-in-distress" is a common and well explored trope, that is designed to make the male protagonist be pushed into the protector role (much more than ordinary tropes,) which is a quality many females reading fiction admire and secretly want. You have written one of the best stories in regards to your trope, but for me to really think of this as a masterpiece, Aaron has to grow as a character (there are 17 chapters left, so I'm feeling optimistic) and become somewhat less "damsel-in-distress" and more "i-can-get-myself-out-of-my-own-troubles-too."
But right now?
You're killing it.
Also I'm saying all this as a running commentary, not as any serious constructive criticism. For your story, Aaron Blare works. She's perfect in all her "damsel-in-distress" glory, and in these types of stories, she's the best type of character you can have.
Did I mention how much I love Matthew's surname? *winks* (I swear I didn't change my user name just because I love Matthew so much. I've been using this alias since 2009!)
| anhugworld chapter 9 . 2/1/2015
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- SMTP/Mail Pass,
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- Dumps,Tracks 1&2 Uk 110$ per 1
- Dumps,Tracks 1&2 Ca 120$ per 1a
- Dumps,Tracks 1&2 Au 120$ per 1
- Dumps,Tracks 1&2 Eu 130$ per 1
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pin: 5678,5432,5187,5505,and much pin other
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- Us (Amex,disco) 7$ per 1
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- Uk (Visa,Master) 15$ per 1
- Uk (Amex) 20$ per 1
- UK Dob 30$
- Ca (Visa,Master) 12$ per 1
- CA Dob 30$
- Au (Visa,Master) 15$ per 1
- AU Dob 30$
- Eu (Visa,Master) 20$ per 1
- AU Dob 35$
- Italy 20$ per 1 (with dob 35$)
- Spain 20$ per 1 (with dob 35$)
- Denmark 25$ per 1 (with dob 35$)
- Sweden 20$ per 1 (with dob 35$)
- France 20$ per 1 (with dob 35$)
- Germany 20$ per 1 (with dob 35$)
- Ireland 20$ per 1 (with dob 35$)
- Mexico 20$ per 1 (with dob 30$)
- Asia 15$ per 1 (with dob 30$)
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will change if cvv not good or dont work
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. Balance 6000$ 500$
. Balance 8000$ 600$
. Balance 12000$ 800$
. Balance 15000$ 1000$
. Balance 20000$ 1200$
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. Balance 12000 GBP 800$
. Balance 16000 GBP 900$
. Balance 20000 GBP 1400$
. Balance 30000 GBP 1600$
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Account Paypal 2000$ 300$
Account Paypal 4000$ 400$
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| butterbar chapter 31 . 1/31/2015
Totally amazing and remarkable work. Just read it when it was finished and I totally enjoyed myself. Tha k goodness it worked out all in th end. Please keep up the good work and don't stop writing. You're gifted, I can tell. :) My appreciation goes to you and your upcoming stories. Despite the plagiarism, I hope you still write. I also do wish for people to be hardworking enough to work their ass and WRITE for goodness sake rather than stealing someone's work. It's really a shame. But anyway, despite all of this, I want you to be celebrating your ass out because you just made and constructed a beautiful piece! You, mam, have just earned a new follower. Salute to you! :)
| Guest chapter 31 . 1/31/2015
It's really unfortunate that you are having issues with plagiarism. I hope it all gets worked out.
on a different note, I really loved your story from beginning to end. The plot and characters had much appreciated depth. Thank you.
| Guest chapter 31 . 1/30/2015
Some bitch named Victoria June is posting No, no on wattpad!
| girlhood chapter 31 . 1/29/2015
thanks for reviewing on my story, on . i got the review while i was at school and i hyperventilated for like five minutes. you mean a lot to me, so thank you again
| Shadowswept chapter 31 . 1/29/2015
Your story is not crap, damn it! I don't understand what kind of satisfaction this person can get from reviews for a story she knows she didn't write. I hope this doesn't happen again, but if it does I urge you not to delete the whole story. If you leave at least a couple of chapters up, you'll get to keep your reviews and have proof of when you wrote it. I've seen other writers do this, and you never know when it can come in handy. Otherwise, I love the story, and I'm thrilled to hear that you're writing a new story!
| Kyranol chapter 31 . 1/28/2015
Dam that sucks, rlly hope you won't take this down some day. It really is an amazing story.
| daresa09 chapter 31 . 1/28/2015
I just went to Wattpad to bitch her out , but it's been taken down . Thank goodness . This is one of my favorite stories and if it gets taken down , I'll cry and go beat up the plagiarists .
| Shadowswept chapter 30 . 1/2/2015
This story is awesome! I love the way the icy cold love interest thawed slowly. I've always wanted to write a story like this, but I've never had the patience. The development of the relationship between Matt and Aaron was so intriguing and interesting. It was thrilling and exciting when things started happening between them, because you expertly built the anticipation. And the emotional connection was equally gripping. They fell in love at a steady, realistic pace. And things weren't immediately perfect and all flowers and sunshine. Things were all the sweeter because they were earned after a true, not contrived, emotional struggle. You know the difference between drama and melodrama. This site is rife with ridiculous melodrama that puts me off so many stories. I love your story so much that I wish it was published so that I could buy it and keep it forever.
| jedbook chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
An obnoxiously brief prologue. That's classic. I love it.
| Lolitroy chapter 30 . 9/11/2014
i was thinking to myself
This could be heaven or this could be hell
| QTHERESSERECTION chapter 3 . 9/9/2014
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/30/2014
| Guest chapter 23 . 8/30/2014
I love this story