|Reviews for Bait Not Babe|
| Pamela chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
If the protagonist, say, the person to whom this point of view belongs, was angry about being used, then why is he or she still taking it? I think if a person has enough selfrespect to feel angry about being chewed up and spit out, he or she would have enough self-respect to stop it from happening again.
This piece is really powerful. There is emotion in every word. But what emotioms are the words expressing? Does it fit the storyline? I hope this helps.
| fictitious facades chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
you portray anger so well, not in the mindless grumblings i usually see.