I love this :) Well written and an awesome idea for a story.

please continue... ITS AWESOME! :D

I NED MORE! sorry for being weird...

I liked this story of yours the best! It was great and if you wanted to you could expand on this one as well. Awesome!

Well, how interesting. An Aungel belongs to a Demon. I wonder how that's gonna turn out. Hmm. ;P Good work. I enjoy the voice of the story, though I get the feeling that Seera is a very excitable Aungel. Well, good job regardless. I liked it. :)

VelvetyCheerio.

P.S: Thanks for adding my story to your alerts!

AH! I knew the intro had even better things to follow! Congrats Gurl! I can never write like that. But I sure as Hell can read it! Bring it on!

great beginning, i'm looking forward to read more.

O! I liked it a bunch!

You've found a great way to be original, and still satisfy the classic parts of good fantasy- namely, really hot bad guys :). Plus Seera's "voice" rings true, which is great.

Definitely keep writing this! You'll have at least one return-reader :)

-R