Reviews for little things that you don't know
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Great poem.

Twilight Starr
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
lol. nice work. keep writing
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
this is really pretty, i dont know what its about exactly, but i have known people that make me feal similarly. like they have this magnificent mysteriousness that maybe you're not worthy of, not equal to. good good good.
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
Hauntingly beautiful once again, my dear.
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
"now you’re face to face with her alone/there’s no way out of this/somehow you let yourself fall with her/in this darkened, dusty room"

i love this stanza. although it's a bit ... dark (i guess) i find a bit of hope tucked in there... like this person who's alone with the girl is there because (s)he wanted to be with her since (s)he "let [himself] fall with her." or maybe i'm just tyring to be too romantic?
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
wow, excellent poem. Very good, flows well and the detail is awesome. Keep it up!

Faith
J.P. Woods chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
well this is a very poem i would expect from you. Another nice job.