Reviews for Puppeteer Undone
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
This is a very powerful piece and I liked the format very much. You did a very good job proof-reading which, contrary to popular belief, does matter. My favourite line: "You wear your scars like jewelry, with no explanation to where you got them or how much you paid." it shows that every slice has a cost, but that is so easy to ignore and it is just a beautiful line. Nice metaphor with the puppets...

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xfail chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
This was incredible. I've had some experiences like this myself, and it's always interesting to see what others say about it. You did an excellent job in conjuring up all these emotions, and not once did I feel that you strayed far from being realistic. This is a very well-written piece.
Undrahas chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
This was really good, and I found nothing wrong.