Reviews for exodus of youth
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
This poem is so sad because it's talking about giving up your childhood. Nice work.

Twilight Starr
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
good wrok
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
Once again great job! I think that everyone can relate to this, but you've just elequantly put it into words. )
mythical chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
A bittersweet idea, growing up and leaving behind who you were. I've often felt it, but could never put it into words as well as this.
Kid In Converse chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
Ahh! That was awesome! I usually think non- rhyming poems are a bit awkward, but you really made it work. Keep up the great work! :-) :-D

- Katie
vaudeville summers chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
Very nice, especially the last stanza :)

Deanna