|Reviews for I am|
| CuriousContradiction chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
I'm glad I read this poem. :)
My favorite two lines: "Shy yet talkative, Too nosy for my own good."
That sums up my username! Contradiction and curious.
I'm still trying to find myself (writing a story about a girl finding herself, actually), but I'm glad that you're able to write a simple poem about it and put yourself into words. Very cool. Good work!
| jekodama chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Nice, but a bit clichéd in my honest opinion. I feel it's a tad void of emotion, and it doesn't flow easily. Again, beware of your use of punctuation marks, and I think it should be 'than' instead of 'then' in this sentence: "A sharper tongue then a brain"
| xkawaiix chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
I love how it ended with hope at the end. :] Keep writing! n_n
| sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
Well, self-reflection is never easy so I applaud you for being brave enough to write this. However, I feel like you could say so much more than just these one-word lines. I think this could be improved if you delve deeper and go past these commonly used words. Keep writing!